http://www.businesssoftwareuser.com/asset-management-software/please-give-feed-back-on-my-cover-letter-and-resume-all-feed-back-welcome Mon, 25 Jan 2010 13:19:59 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 http://www.businesssoftwareuser.com/asset-management-software/please-give-feed-back-on-my-cover-letter-and-resume-all-feed-back-welcome/comment-page-1#comment-487 Jules Thu, 07 Jan 2010 23:09:59 +0000 #comment-487 your cover letter is too generic. What skills? what is great about your personality. Don't say that then put the information down again in another paragraph down the page. That's redundant! Your 3rd paragraph is too long. I would have quit reading long before I got to it. Finally, don't leave it to the employer to call you, tell him you will be contacting him.<br><b>References : </b><br> your cover letter is too generic. What skills? what is great about your personality. Don’t say that then put the information down again in another paragraph down the page. That’s redundant! Your 3rd paragraph is too long. I would have quit reading long before I got to it.
Finally, don’t leave it to the employer to call you, tell him you will be contacting him.
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